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    *This is the first chapter of my new book. I've always liked some of the great names the USFL generates, so I "borrowed" a few for this story.

    - Jason



    Chapter 1

    “Come on, Susan,” yelled the large man, “We're going to miss the plane!”
    “For God's sake, George, we have plenty of time to get to the airport,” answered the woman, shaking her head in disgust. “It's a ten minute drive.”
    George Fox remained standing at the front door, keeping it propped open with his shoe. Sweat began to bead on his reddening forehead and drip onto his thick wire rimmed glasses. His thin gray hair was plastered onto his head as if he had been standing in front of a powerful fan. His growing impatience with his wife, Susan, was threatening to explode. Susan, deeply tanned and without any grey hair to betray her age, ran around the kitchen double checking that all the appliances were turned off and that the answer machine was on. Finally satisfied, she picked up her last piece of luggage and dipped under George's arm to exit the house.
    “Let me get that for you,” said John Reinhard, her son-in-law. John took her bag and tossed in the back of the SUV that was idling in the driveway. Quickly closing the back, he then opened the front passenger door allowing Susan to slide into the vehicle next to her daughter Sarah, who was driving. George climbed into the back seat with John and finally they were off.

    “Mom, did you pack sunscreen?” asked Sarah, simultaneously changing the radio station and brushing her hair.
    “Brakes,” said John from the back automatically, as he spotted the cars ahead of them begin to slow down. He was well aware that his wife was rarely looking out the windshield.
    “Do you want to drive?” Sarah snapped.
    “That's enough of that,” stated George. “If you kids are going to come to Hawaii with us, there is to be no arguing.”
    “We're not arguing, George,” laughed John, “I'm just trying to get there in one piece.” John settled back into the seat and closed his eyes. If he couldn't see the car weaving across the road it was easier to keep his mouth shut while his wife drove.
    Before Sarah could respond, Susan changed the conversation. “Do you think your sister is going to be all right by herself?” she asked Sarah.
    “Mom, she's 19. She'll be fine. And she'll hardly be alone. I'm sure Fulton will be with her most of the time.”
    “I'm sure he will,” whispered John from the back, keeping his eyes closed.
    Shooting John a dirty look in the rearview mirror, Sarah continued, “Better Fulton than Tina.”
    Fulton “Big Cat” Lyons was the boyfriend of Sarah's sister Miranda. Tall, muscled and bulky he had been a star linebacker in high school and was on the verge of being a starter his freshman year of college. John liked the young man well enough, but Sarah was very protective of Miranda and didn't want to see her settle down with her first serious boyfriend. She was disappointed that the couple had stayed together through Miranda's senior year, thinking that with Fulton away at college that Miranda's feelings would dull.
    Tina Foster, on the other hand, was the bad influence in Miranda's life. Tina was pretty enough to catch any man's attention and she knew it. Tina drank, smoked, and if you listened to the rumors, did drugs and went home with just about any guy that gave her the time of day. Both Sarah and Susan tried to steer Miranda away from Tina.
    “Well, maybe I should have Harriet check on them this week,” said Susan, referring to her sister.
    “Mom, they'll be fine. The Fox Den is probably the safest place in the whole state.”
    The Fox Den was the family “cottage.” Most Northern Wisconsin cottages were small two bedroom homes with a fireplace and if the owners were lucky, a bathroom. Many still used an outhouse. The Fox Den, however, was more of a mansion in the woods. Situated on Ballinger Lake, the Fox Den had six bedrooms, three bathrooms, two living rooms, a dining room and a bar. It had been in the Fox family since the day it was built. Over the years it had been added to and remodeled into the masterpiece that it was today. Owned by six brothers and sisters, they still managed to peacefully coexist. Miranda and some friends had asked permission to use the Fox Den while her parents and her Aunt Rachel and Uncle Campbell went on a cruise to Hawaii. George had to work hard to persuade his other family members that Miranda would treat the Den with respect. In the end, they had relented and she had been granted permission when George had agreed to allow Rachel and Campbell's son Wes to bring some friends to the Den in the future without supervision.
    All the kids are growing up, mused George, as the car sped toward the airport.


    Miranda Fox examined herself in the mirror. The 19 year old didn't like what she saw. Her hair had a reddish hue and curled toward the ends, near her shoulders. She didn't like the way her eyes sat farther apart than everyone else. Fulton called them “exotic.” Miranda thought she looked almost alien. Though she was thin and had ample curves, Miranda thought she looked fat. She turned to examine her rear end and focused on the miniscule ripples under her butt, below her oversized granny panties.
    I'm such a cow.
    Sighing in disgust, she turned away and quickly dressed. An oversized t-shirt and dark sweat pants allowed her to hide. She went back to packing her suitcase. Tossing in similar clothes, a moderate swimsuit, and pajamas, she was ready to go. She dragged the suitcase to the stairs and let it roll down the staircase into the waiting arms of her boyfriend, Fulton Lyons.
    Fulton was a huge young man. Over six feet tall and all muscle, save a small paunch starting to form from his excessive consumption of beer. Small eyes made his head appear too large, even for his massive frame. His brown hair always looked unruly, as if he had just rolled out of bed and proceeded into the day without care. Today he was dressed in khaki shorts, bright white tennis shoes, and his football jersey which had is nickname “Big Cat” emblazoned on the back. He easily snatched up the rolling suitcase and waited to see if another was to follow.
    He smiled as his beautiful girlfriend galloped down the stairs to him. He loved her red hair, curvy body and green hued eyes. He was particularly enamored with her full lips, though she didn't smile near enough for his liking. With his free arm, he encircled her waist and kissed her passionately.
    “Is everyone else here?” asked Miranda.
    “Sammi and Herc have been here for a while. Jade and Pete just pulled up. Of course, we're waiting on Tina,” answered Fulton.
    They stepped outside and Fulton added Miranda's bag to the pile of luggage in the back of his truck. He motioned to his friend Steve “Hercules” Simoens to help him cover the bags with the large tarp he had purchased for this trip. Afterward, they rolled the truck bed cover back and snapped it into place.
    “That'll keep things dry as a bone even if a monster storm hits on the way up,” said Fulton, satisfied with his work.
    “Yup,” said Steve, in typical fashion. A large man but more evenly proportioned than Fulton, Steve rarely said much and he always agreed with Fulton. His bushy eyebrows overpowered his face, almost hiding his dark eyes.
    Steve's girlfriend Samantha “Sammi” Johnson stood quietly nearby. She was even quieter than Steve. She was naturally tanned and had straight, thin brown hair that moved with even the slightest breeze. Heavy blue eyeshadow brought out the color in her eyes. Rail thin and extremely tall, she slouched to appear the same height as her boyfriend. She wore a sweatshirt and tight beaded jeans with her cellphone peeking out of her back pocket.
    “I'm getting a little cold,” said Sammi. “Can we leave soon?”
    “We have to wait for Tina to get here,” answered Miranda.
    “Oh,” giggled Sammi, “Okay.”
    Miranda rolled her eyes. She didn't care for the tall girl at all and made little effort to hide it.
    “Why do you have to be such a bitch?” whispered Fulton.
    “Why do we have to take that idiot with us?” shot back Miranda.
    “Because she's Herc's girlfriend and Herc is my best friend. Just like we have to take Tina with us, because she's your friend.”
    “You guys ready to party?” broke in Jade Currothers. Jade was a natural beauty. She sported a tight body with firm breasts, a perfect backside and flawless skin the color of dusky copper. She had a quick, easy smile and eyes that lit the room when she talked. Her hair was raven dark and voluminous. Jade was many a man's idea of the perfect woman. Today, dressed in a bulky sweatshirt and knitted pink hat she looked more adorable than sexy.
    “If Tina ever gets here,” answered Fulton.
    “You should have let me pick her up, too,” said Jeremiah “Pete” Peterson. “She doesn't live too far from Jade.” Pete was tall, lanky and heavily tattooed. It looked like he hadn't shaved in days. Despite the chilly weather, Pete was wearing a baggy white t-shirt and pants than hung off his hips.
    “That was the plan, but when I texted her this morning, she had spent the night with some guy from the bar. Since she got her fake ID, she's been out almost every night,” explained Fulton. “But at least it was easy to get booze for the weekend. When the guy at the liquor store started to look closer at her ID, she just started flirting until he forgot about it. Hell, she even got a free bottle of Tequila by flashing him.”
    A blue Camaro roared into the driveway. Tina Foster staggered out of the passenger door wearing her pajamas and carrying a duffel bag. Her blue eyes were glazed and her dirty blonde hair was wild. Still, she was smiling, her perfect teeth white as the snow. She turned and stuck her head back inside the car, laughed, and waved goodbye to the driver.
    “I'm here, bitches!” she yelled.
    “Are you drunk?” questioned Jade.
    “I don't know. What time is it?”
    “It's almost eleven.”
    “Then I'm probably still drunk. I think the after bar party ended around seven,” laughed Tina, tossing her bag in the back of the truck and slamming the tailgate shut.
    Fulton, Miranda and Tina sat in the front seat, with the other four making themselves comfortable in the back with the girls sitting in the middle. Fulton pulled onto the road and began the long drive to the Fox Den.


    “You mean there isn't any internet access?” said Ryan, sounding worried. “How am I going to check on my auctions?”
    “Your game will survive a few days without you,” said Dominic, sounding exasperated.
    “But I just listed the Sword of Damocles!” whined Ryan.
    “Ryan!” yelled Wes, “I'll take you into town. I'm sure you can get a wi-fi signal somewhere.”
    “Ok,” said Ryan, sounding relieved, “It'll only take me a few hours.”
    Dominic Fogarty shook his head and sighed. Where did I go wrong? He asked himself. Dominic was an average high school student. With just a few months left before graduation, he was looking forward to college and a chance to start his social life over. He didn't really mind being pegged as one of the “geeks” but Ryan made even a typical geek look bad.
    Ryan Brunhard was short, chubby and wore glasses. He was probably the smartest person in the school, specifically including the teachers. However, what Ryan achieved academically was overshadowed by his abysmal social life. More comfortable playing games in an online universe than even the simplest social interactions in the real world, Ryan often embarrassed his friends. But after they had taken the time to get to know him, he had proven to be not only funny and adventurous, but loyal as well. When Dominic had needed money to buy parts for his truck, Ryan had simply opened his wallet and handed him a fistful of bills.
    Wesley Fox was the center of this group. Average height, average weight, average looks. Some people mistook Dominic as his brother. Other than their eyes, they were remarkably similar. Dominic had small eyes and always had a clean shaven face. Wes had large eyes, made larger by the glasses he wore and often had a five o'clock shadow. His deep voice often startled people. His family always had money, so Wes usually got whatever he wanted. Despite a bedroom full of the latest toys and later on, the newest video games, Wes still had trouble making friends. Ryan's family had money too, and their parents ran in the same circles, so the boys gradually became friends as they grew up. Wes and Dominic had met at school when they were paired up in a science class. A discussion about the paperback book that Wes was reading led them to their similar tastes in fantasy and science fiction. When they decided to try a role playing game they needed another person and Ryan was the obvious choice.
    They were driving North, to the family cottage that Wes' parents shared with his aunts and uncles. Neither of the other boys had been there before. With his parents headed to Hawaii, Wes originally had just planned to spend the long weekend at home. Dominic, however, heard about his chance to go to the Fox Den and practically begged for the chance to visit the “Mansion in the Woods” and ride the snowmobiles. Wes relented and then convinced Ryan to go with by promising a marathon weekend of role-playing. Ryan valued his pen and paper character almost as much as his online ones.
    “I've been thinking,” started Ryan, “That Bromin might make the switch from his traditional broadsword to a battle axe if we find something good in the temple.”
    Wes laughed. Dominic sighed.


    20 years ago

    “Man, I don't want to live in Louisiana,” whispered the young man dressed in a rented suit to the older gentlemen seated beside him.
    “Leo, it's not like we have a choice about it. I've tried to convince them to trade the pick, but they are afraid of what their fans will say if they give up the chance to get the best player in the draft,” said his agent, voice pitched low enough that the many microphones and cameras filling the room could not pick it up.
    “Damn it, Tom, you better plan on finding me someplace nice to live in that swamp of a city,” responded Leo.
    The Commissioner stepped to the podium, shuffled some papers noisily before setting them down and leaning into the microphone.
    Here we go, thought Leo, preparing himself to stand.
    “With the first pick in the draft, the Louisiana Pirates select Buddy Sommer, running back from Indiana.”
    “What the f-”, started Leo, before Tom managed to clap a hand over his mouth. Struggling free, Leo and said, “What the hell was that, Tom?”
    “I don't know. They must have changed their mind since this morning.”
    “So, I'm going to end up in fucking Wichita?”
    “Shh, Leo. The cameras are on you!”
    “I don't give a shit. I'm sure as hell not moving to Wichita!”
    “Leo!”
    “Fix it, Tom!”
    Tom stood and sprinted to the corner and began furiously dialing on one of the courtesy phones provided by the league.
    “With the second pick, the Wichita Harvesters select quarterback Kris Reeves from Texas State.”
    “Son of a bitch!” yelled Leo, no longer caring which camera was focused where.

    Leo sat quietly, his face red with anger. Tom sat next to him, sweat beading on his forehead.
    “With the 18th pick in this years draft, the Portland Dragons select quarterback Leo Herrick out of Texas.”
    Leo stood and waved to the crowd, trying to ignore the boos and catcalls. He obligingly proceeded up on stage to pose with the Commissioner and a Dragon's jersey featuring the number one on it.

    “Damn it, Tom, this is not what we agreed to!”
    “Leo, when we thought you would be picked number one overall a $30 million signing bonus was possible. It just isn't going to happen at number 18. It's already the preseason. You've missed all of training camp. Chances are that you will spend this season on the bench and they just aren't going to spend all the money for that. I think we take their offer. You get a $2 million bonus and a three year contract loaded with incentives. When you show them what you can do, all the clauses will kick in and you'll clear $15 million before the contract is up,” explained Tom.
    “$2 million will be almost nothing after taxes!”
    “This is the best we are going to do, Leo.”
    “Fine. I'll sign the contract. Then you're fired.”

    18 years ago

    Portland Observer – Quarterback Leo Herrick finally got his chance to show why he was drafted in the first round two seasons ago. When starter George Sanderson went down to a knee injury, Herrick entered the game and quickly completed five passes in a row, topping it off with a touchdown pass to Robbie Page. Unfortunately on the next series, Herrick was sacked by Ben Banks and driven into the ground. He came up holding his throwing shoulder. Preliminary reports indicate a torn rotator cuff. Herrick's season is over.

    16 years ago

    Vancouver Daily – The Vancouver Vultures have announced the signing of quarterback Leo Herrick from the States. Herrick appears to have recovered from a terrible injury to his right shoulder. Passed over by the United States league, Herrick signed with the Vultures for a reported $25,000 per game.

    15 years ago

    Portland Observer – Former Dragon's quarterback Leo Herrick was arrested on drug charges in Vancouver, Canada today. Vancouver police reportedly found Herrick and several others passed out in a hotel room after other guests had complained about noise. Methamphetamine was seized at the scene.

    10 years ago

    Vancouver Daily – Leo Herrick, 32, was convicted today of murdering six young women at the University of Vancouver. Herrick, a former football player, was sentenced to life in prison, without the possibility of parole. He will first serve out a 10 year sentence in the States for a manslaughter conviction for the death of Brett Sanders. Sanders was killed when Herrick's car struck him just south of the border.

    Present

    “Leo Herrick, huh?” said Marcus, “I think I drafted you for my fantasy team one year.”
    “Don't talk to the prisoner,” ordered Larry, the older of the two guards. “Let's just get him to Canada as fast as possible. Then we can enjoy some beers before we have to head back.”
    My books are available at: http://www.amazon.com/Jason-Scott/e/..._athr_dp_pel_1

  • #2
    Very cool man.

    Good stuff.
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    • #3
      Very interesting indeed.

      All I can think about is banging Jade, though.

      One tip: there is no University of Vancouver. Go with University of British Columbia. Although I recognize you are writing fiction, involving a fictional football league also, so maybe a fictional university doesn't matter.
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      • #4
        Thanks.

        I wish the formatting had transferred over when I cut and pasted it here. If there is interest, I'll keep posting as the story develops.
        My books are available at: http://www.amazon.com/Jason-Scott/e/..._athr_dp_pel_1

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        • #5
          Courtney Wheeler read the first chapter (well, he needed help on some of the words from several of the Arsenal players) and commented, "if those bums Sommer and Herrick can be in that book, I should too".

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          • #6
            The USFL gets .0000001% of the royalties.
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            • #7
              Originally posted by vinatieri4prez
              Very interesting indeed.

              All I can think about is banging Jade, though.

              One tip: there is no University of Vancouver. Go with University of British Columbia. Although I recognize you are writing fiction, involving a fictional football league also, so maybe a fictional university doesn't matter.
              Jade is based on a real person
              My books are available at: http://www.amazon.com/Jason-Scott/e/..._athr_dp_pel_1

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              • #8
                Present

                “Leo Herrick, huh?” said Marcus, “I think I drafted you for my fantasy team one year.”
                “Don't talk to the prisoner,” ordered Larry, the older of the two guards. “Let's just get him to Canada as fast as possible. Then we can enjoy some beers before we have to head back. I like Canadian beer. Not as good as Polish beer, but better than some of the stuff we have here.”
                They drove a vehicle that resembled a small camper. Marcus was driving, while Larry sat in the passenger seat that swiveled so that he could keep on eye on the prisoner. Leo Herrick rode alone, legs cuffed to the seat, handcuffed and seated behind a steel cage a few feet from the drivers compartment. Protocol stated that the guard in the passenger seat should be watching the prisoner at all times. However, just 45 minutes from the prison, Larry had spun around to easier converse with Marcus.
                Larry was almost sixty and had dodged a forced early retirement just about as long as he was going to be able to. Volunteering for prisoner transfer runs made him valuable enough to keep around for another year or two. Silver haired and featuring a large dark mustache, Larry peered through his glasses over his shoulder, making sure Herrick was still confined. He hadn't moved or spoken since being brought onto the transport.
                “Dispatch, this is Transport 802, do you copy?” said Marcus, into the CB radio.
                “Copy 802, what's your 20?”
                “We are about 60 minutes outside of Green Bay. We have no issues and will be proceeding north to Marinette.”
                “Roger that. I'll inform Marinette to expect you for a rest stop in about three hours. Over and Out.”
                “Why did you tell them we were so far away? We left early and are making great time,” questioned Larry, “We'll be in Green Bay in just a few minutes.”
                “We can't go to Green Bay and not stop to see the stadium! We'll just stop real quick. If anyone questions us, we can say the van was overheating or something.”
                Larry hesitated and then agreed.

                “That's magnificent!” shouted Marcus, parked in the shadow of the majestic stadium. “Just think, for professional football, this is the pinnacle of arenas. All the greats played here.”
                Traffic streamed by the parking lot without taking notice of the van marked “Police Transport.” It was not uncommon for the citizens of the city to see cars simply parked in the empty lot, their passengers standing in awe of the landmark that the people of the city took for granted.
                Leo Herrick craned his neck as forward as the restraints would allow. Though riddled from the drugs he had taken during his downfall, a fuzzy memory erupted onto the surface of his consciousness. He'd been here before! What was the name of this city? Green Bay! That was it! The memory faded quickly, replaced by a burning fury to get out of the van.
                “Officer!” yelled Herrick. “Officer!”
                Opening the passenger door, Larry stuck his head inside, “What's the problem, Leo?” Larry always called a prisoner by his first name. In his many years of service, he had learned that connected with the prisoner was the first step in staying safe. Prisoners wanted to harm an officer, not their good friend, Larry.
                “I have to pee, Larry.”
                “Come on, Leo, you know that's not possible. We're still a good hour and half from our next stop.”
                “Larry, I have to go. Now. Please,” pleaded Herrick, looking like a sad, worn out victim rather than the brutal killer Larry knew him to be.
                “Marcus, we have a problem,” said Larry, closing the van door. “Leo has to use the bathroom. We'll have to stop over at the station before we head to Marinette.”
                “We can't do that. We're not supposed to be in town yet, remember? We can stop at the station in about 45 minutes.”
                Larry relayed the information to Leo.
                “Larry, man, I can't wait that long. Just let me go on the side of the road or something.”
                “Marcus, he's gonna piss himself, and then we are going to have to clean him up,” said Larry. “It's your call.”
                “Shit,” said Marcus, “Let's drive over where those semi trucks are parked.”
                The guards climbed back into the van and drove to the corner of the parking lot. Taking a careful look around, Marcus decided it was deserted enough to take the chance. At worst, he knew his badge could get him out of most problems.
                Larry opened the side door and quickly cuffed Leo Herrick with his hands behind his back. The leg cuffs were unlatched from the seat and Larry helped the prisoner stand up, taking care to make sure Leo didn't hit his head. Leo carefully stepped down and into the shadow between two semi trucks.
                “Come on, man, I gotta go!” pleaded Herrick. “I can't take it out with my hands behind my back.”
                “Marcus, you help him. I'm not pulling his Johnson out for him,” said Larry, stepping behind Leo. “It was your call to come see the stadium.”
                With a look of disgust, Marcus stepped forward and pulled down the front of the mans bright orange pants. Leo was wearing his prison issued boxers, stained yellow from years of use. Gagging, Marcus yanked them down too, allowing the prisoners penis to spring free. Leo immediately began to urinate. The acrid smell of the urine made Larry gag. He released his hands from Leo's cuffs for just a second. Leo spun and began to piss on Marcus.
                “Son of a bitch!” yelled Marcus, dancing out of the way of the stream just a second too late. The front of his uniform was drenched in urine. Larry laughed out loud, just as Leo swung his arms from behind his back over his head, still cuffed. He elbowed Larry hard in the face, dropping the older man like a sack of potatoes. Leo looped the chain around Marcus's neck and began to choke him. Marcus fell to the ground, pawing for his gun. Leo stepped on the officer's hand, bones breaking as Marcus screamed hoarsely, his face now red as he struggled to breathe. Marcus passed out. Herrick stood quickly, grabbing the gun from the holster of the downed officer. He finished urinating by directing the stream at Marcus's face.
                Larry was struggling to his feet. He kept his hands in the air. “Leo, buddy, don't do this.”
                “I have things to do, Larry, I have to get out of here,” answered Leo, keeping the gun pointed at Larry's chest.
                “Don't make my wife a widow, Leo. You know about Linda, remember? I even brought you some of her brownies for your birthday last year.”
                “Yeah, yeah. Linda,” babbled Leo, his eyes wide. “But I gotta go.”
                “You can go, buddy. I won't stop you.”
                “You'll tell!”
                “Only when they find me. How about you lock my in the van? That'll work. I'll tell them that Marcus let you out and that you got the drop on him. They'll probably try to fire me, but I'm so close to retirement, they'll cut a deal. And you'll be long gone.”
                “Get in the van, then, Larry. Uncuff me.”
                Larry thought over his options. He saw no safe way of disarming Leo. He had no idea of Marcus was dead or alive. He lay face up, not moving, urine pooling near his eyes, which were closed. Hesitating only a second, Larry produced the key to the cuffs and freed Leo from the metal restraints.
                “There you go, Leo. You're free,” said Larry, quietly.
                Leo took the leg cuffs and placed them securely around Larry's ankles and then fastened them to the seat. “I'll leave the handcuffs off. I hate those. I'm sure you would too.”
                “Thank you, Leo,” said Larry.
                Leo tossed the key onto the floor of the front seat and then slammed the door shut. He stripped off Marcus's pants and despite the wetness, put them on. He removed his prison issued orange shirt and stole Marcus's shoes. Now dressed in black pants and a white tank top and his tattoos dressing his arms, he looked like every other street thug in the city. Before vanishing into the city, he stomped hard on Marcus's groin. Marcus did not move.



                Chapter 2

                “This place is fucking amazing!” raved Ryan. “Why haven't you brought me here before? This is uber quality stuff!”
                “It's just a cabin in the woods,” said Wes, clearly embarrassed. “And it's not mine. It belongs to the entire Fox family.”
                “Still, it's pretty cool,” chimed in Dominic, “Give us the grand tour!”
                The three boys carefully wiped their feet on the rug just inside the doorway. The living room was decorated in dark woods and had the feel of a hunter's cabin, Several animal heads mounted to wall being the focal point. Two couches made an L-shaped sitting area along with an overstuffed chair that sat near a frosted window. A flat screen television sat in the corner near the staircase that led to the upperfloor.
                “That TV is bigger than the one at my house,” laughed Dominic.
                Wes pointed to the door behind the couch, “That lead's to the master bedroom. Stay out of there. It's for the adults only.”
                “We're not adults?” asked Ryan.
                “You know what I mean. My parents. My aunts and uncles. They use that bedroom while they're here.”
                Wes led them around the corner, pointing out the door to the bathroom as they entered the huge dining room. A huge wooden table surrounded by 12 chairs dominated the room. The stove, sink and refrigerator along the wall were lit only by the window over the sink. Sliding glass door led to a large wooden deck. Peering through the glass, Dominic could see a hot tub and a path that led down to the lake. Snow still covered the deck and obscured most of the path.
                “And this, my friends, is one of the best parts,” said Wes, pulling back a room dividing screen that folded up as he opened it. Behind the screen was a large, black wooden bar with a gilded stripe running around the rail. An old, but elegant, pool table rested in the center of the room and a dartboard hung in the corner. Large speakers and a stereo system finished off the bar area.
                “Sweet!” shouted Ryan, checking out the fridge behind the bar. “There's beer in here and a ton of liquor in this cabinet.”
                “We can't drink my parents alcohol,” fretted Wes. “Good thing I brought some for us. The box in the back of the truck has a case of beer, a bottle of rum and a bottle of tequila.”
                “Nice,” said Dominic. “I'll get the beer in the fridge right after you show me where to dump my clothes,” he said, hefting the duffel bag packed with his belongings.
                Nodding to the spiral staircase on the corner of the Bar, the boys climbed to the second floor. The upstairs was a simply L-shaped room with six doors. A picnic table sat in the center of the room and various toy boxes lined the wall. The room was painted an uninspiring beige and had several pictures of woodland scenes.
                “Five bedrooms and a bathroom up here. That one's the crapper,” said Wes, pointing toward the door closest to the stairs that led to the living room. “Which bedroom do you want? These three are the Red Room, The Blue Room and The Green Room,” he continued opening each door as he spoke it's name. Each room was overly decorated as indicated by it's color. The Green Room, for example, had two twin beds, each adorned with a shamrock green bedspread. Mint green curtains framed the window, and a dull olive green carpeted the floor. It reminded Dominic of Oz.
                “Or we can all bunk together in the Jungle Room or the Outer Space Room. They both have three beds. The more rooms we stay in, the more we need to clean before we leave.”
                After a brief discussion, they decided to stay in the Outer Space Room with Dominic loudly proclaiming that if Ryan began to snore too loudly, that he would move across the hall to the Green Room, even if it meant having to clean it himself.
                The Outer Space room had dark grey carpeting and light gray walls. The three beds had black bedspreads over grey sheets. A large, framed poster of the moon hung on the wall and tiny stars were painted on the dark ceiling. The boys each tossed their bag onto a bed and then went back downstairs to unload the food and drink they had brought with.
                Ryan stopped after the first trip and sat down at the table, popping open a cola. Dominic just rolled his eyes and helped Wes make the final run to the truck. Wes loaded the groceries into the refrigerator, while Dominic took the beer to the Bar fridge.
                “Lunch? Or should we go for a ride right away?” asked Wes.
                “I don't want to ride any snowmobiles,” whined Ryan. “I hate the cold.”
                “That's one of the reasons we came up here!” said Dominic, now clearly irritated with large man. “But I don't care what you do. I'm going riding.”
                “Are you going to be all right here by yourself,” asked Wes.
                “I'll be fine,” stated Ryan, not looking up as he thumbed across the screen of his phone. “I can't get a signal here at all.”
                “Oh yeah. You won't. There's a phone on the wall there for emergencies. Don't use it for anything else, since we pay for long distance yet here.”
                “Great. No internet, no phone. I suppose there's not any satellite TV either?”
                “Nope, just a good old fashioned antenna. We get three channels,” laughed Wes. “I bet when the next generation takes over the Fox Den, that'll be the first upgrade, but while our parents are still the owners, they want to keep it like they remember it as kids. It took some major begging to the get the flatscreen and blu-ray player up here last year.”

                Ryan went back upstairs and dug his role-playing books out of his bag. He took them, along with a notebook, back downstairs to the large table and began outlining an adventure for them to play through later. Dominic and Wes bundled themselves in snowsuits and walked through the crunchy snow to the garage. The garage was well maintained and the overhead door slid open easily. Four snowmobiles awaited them. Wes indicated the two they should take, and the boys pushed them out into the snow. After filling them with gas, Wes tossed the can back inside, pulled the garage door shut and mounted his sled. They put on their helmets, fired up their rides and sped down the trail with Wes in the lead.




                Chapter 3

                “Are we there yet?” asked Tina. “I really gotta take a piss.”
                “Just a few more minutes,” said Fulton, holding back the irritation in his voice.
                The road had become icy and the truck was rolling along at just 30 miles per hour. Slowly they passed a sign that read “Montello – Unincorporated.”
                “What does that mean anyway? Unincorporated,” asked Pete.
                “It means there is not a mayor of Montello. No local government. The county takes care of everything here,” answered Miranda, having asked her parents the same question many years ago. “There are only a few hundred people who live here year round. In the summer, almost a thousand more are here at any given time. It's a pretty small place.”
                “There! Stop there!” shouted Tina, her finger extended toward the windshield, where a green and white painted gas station was visible.
                Fulton pulled the truck into the gas station and parked next to one of the pumps. As soon as the truck had stopped rolling, Tina was scrambling over Miranda to get out the door first. She ran inside, her unruly blonde hair fanning out behind her. Fulton shook his head and exited the truck to fill it with gas. The rest of the occupants piled out as well. While Fulton attended the gas pump, the others flooded into the building; the bell that signaled a new customer repeated ringing. Tina ran out around them carrying a large wooden toilet seat with a key dangling from it.
                Inside, Sammi and Hercules walked together, holding hands. They stopped to pick out some fruit pies and cupcakes from the display of favorite childhood treats. Jade was at the counter, showing her ID to the plump, bored girl behind the counter. After a quick glance at the card, the girl brushed back her long, curly brown hair and rang up a pack of cigarettes for her.
                Miranda looked at the bulletin board near the exit. She saw offers for babysitting, snow removal, and an advertisement for the 5th Annual Hotel Hell festival. Hotel Hell has the been the locals name for a supposedly haunted hotel that had burned down several years ago. Now the townsfolk celebrated the destruction each year by having a party. The poster showed that the event had taken place almost six months ago, in the summer, but had not yet been taken off the bulletin board. Likely it would stay there until it was replaced with a new one next summer.
                “Do I look stupid?” whispered the girl behind the counter, holding Pete's ID in her hand. He stood in front of her with a case of beer on the counter.
                “Listen, Hope,” he said, reading her name tag, “I know my picture isn't the greatest, but I just got my hair cut.”
                “Really?” she said incredulously, “So you're 32?”
                “Well, I do look good for my age,” Pete said, beginning to lose confidence.
                “Thirty bucks,” said Hope handing him back his ID.
                “For a case of beer! It said fifteen on the sign!”
                “Fifteen for the beer and fifteen for me,” she said flatly, not caring if he took the offer.
                Pete hesitated only a moment. “Deal,” he said, “And you give me your phone number.”
                Finally the girl behind the girl smiled, her eyes lighting up with interest. She pocketed his money and jotted her number on the back of the receipt that Pete stuffed into his pocket.
                “Where you guys headed?” she asked him.
                “I don't know. To her cottage,” he said, pointing to Miranda.
                “Ballinger Lake,” said Miranda.
                “Ah. Rich kids,” said Hope, her smile fading.
                “Not me,” laughed Pete. “Just here to party.”
                “Well, you better get that beer into your truck before Officer Mancheski sees it,” said Hope, pointing out the window toward the police car pulling into the parking lot.
                “Shit!” yelled Pete, scrambling out the door. He tossed the case of beer into the bed of the truck just as the officers were stepping out.
                The teenagers quietly exited the gas station and began getting back into the truck. Tina came around the corner, looking relieved, and still carrying the toilet seat with the restroom key dangling from it. The shorter, stockier officer held the door open for her and was rewarded with a smile. Tina stepped inside to return the key.
                The other officer, his hair dark save for a grey streak near the front, approached the truck. He had a full beard and mustache that obscured most of his features. His blue eyes were magnified by his dark framed glasses. He maintained a serious look until he spotted Miranda in the front seat of the truck.
                “Hey, Miranda,” he said warmly, stepping to her side of the vehicle. She rolled down the window despite the cold.
                “Hi, Officer Townsend,” she said, “How are things in the middle of nowhere?”
                “Same as always. Where are your parents?” he asked.
                “Hawaii. They went on a cruise with Campbell and Rachel.”
                “Must be nice. So, what are you kids up to?” he asked.
                “Heading to the Fox Den for the weekend,” she said cautiously.
                “I see.” The officer extended a hand inside the window toward Fulton. “Fulton, nice to see you again,” he said grasping the boy's hand firmly. “I haven't seen the rest of you around. I'm Officer Townsend Marks. I hope you have a great weekend in my quiet little town.”
                “It's not a town,” spouted Pete, “It's unincorporated.”
                Officer Townsend laughed. “That it is. But you know what I mean. Go have a fun weekend, but don't cause any trouble.” Spotting Tina approaching the car, Townsend stepped back and opened the truck door for her. He closed the door for her and stepped away as Fulton fired up the truck. Waving as they pulled out, Townsend laughed to himself.
                “That guy with the muscles was cute,” said Officer Keith Mancheski, joining Townsend.
                “The blonde in the front wasn't too bad either,” laughed Townsend. “Maybe we'll stop and see how their weekend is going sometime.”


                Chapter 4

                He had to get out of the city. Surely, someone would discover the guard locked inside the van before too long. He had no other goal in mind than to escape the confines of this urban area. He walked silently along the streets. Other people instinctively stepped aside as he passed them. Several of the those more in tune with their base nature even went as far as to cross the street to avoid him. He stopped at a park to refresh himself from the the drinking fountain and to use the restroom. He felt the eyes of the mothers from the playground watching him.
                Quit looking at me! shouted his mind. Leave me alone!
                He continued on. The sun shone brightly, yet gave him no warmth. The crisp wind bit into him and stung his face. His exposed arms began to grow red from exposure. He approached the ramp that led to the highway. He needed to make a choice now. The highway was the quicker way out of the city, but he was much more likely to be noticed by the police as he walked along it. He felt a car stopping slowing beside him.
                “Hey! You need a ride?”
                He turned to see a small white truck slowing beside him. Rather it had been white at some point, but was now painted in a multitude of colored squares overlapping each other in a dizzying pattern. Behind the wheel was a younger man with a wild beard, but friendly, welcoming blue eyes.
                “I'm heading north a ways. Want me to drop you off somewhere?” asked the young man.
                “Sure,” answered Leo, opening the door and sitting down. The floor of the truck was littered with empty soda cans, fast food bags and other assorted trash. The truck reeked of cigarettes. As soon as he closed the door, the truck sped onto the highway.
                “I'm Ben,” said the man, not offering a handshake. He held an energy drink between his legs and a lit cigarette in his hand. He flicked ash out the window that was open just a crack. “You want one?” he said, indicating the pack of smokes sitting on the dash.
                Leo nodded, taking a cigarette from the package and lighting it with the lighter tucked inside the cellophane.
                “Thanks,” said Leo.
                “No problem. You looked cold. I hate being cold.”
                Leo did not answer, but stared straight ahead, enjoying the burning smoke in his lungs.
                Several minutes passed before Ben broke the silence. “So, you got any drugs? Pills? Weed?”
                “No,” stated Leo.
                “Damn. You looked like you would. No offense. I need something soon,” rattled Ben, clearly agitated. “You got any money? I know someplace we can get some.”
                Leo reached into his pocket and drew out the guard's wallet. Opening it, he saw that it contained $140 along with a drivers license and a picture of the guards family. Leo tossed the license and picture out the window along with the rest of the wallet, keeping only the cash.
                “I have this,” he said to Ben, holding the bills in the air.
                “Sweet! We'll stop and see Mike.”

                About ten minutes later they had stopped in a trailer park along side the highway. Standing outside a dirty, once white, trailer was a man wearing a ball cap and wire rimmed glasses. His eyes were glazed over.
                “So, uh, Ben. How much you need?”
                “Just an eighth, Mike” answered Ben.
                “You got, uh, cash, or something better,” asked Mike.
                “Just case. No speed today. No one has any,” answered Ben. Leo pulled out the money and handed some of it to Mike. Mike handed Ben a small baggie filled with a dark green herb.
                “You got anything harder?” asked Leo, stunning Ben by speaking more than one word at a time.
                “Like what?” asked Mike, cautiously. While the tattooed man in front of him didn't look like a cop, you could never be sure.
                “Coke. Meth,” answered Leo, licking his lips in anticipation.
                “I've got Meth if you have the money for it.”
                “Show me.”
                Mike led Leo into the trailer. Ben stayed outside and already had produced a small pipe. He intended to smoke before they drove any further. The trailer smelled of urine and garbage. Several cats lay on the couch, lounging in the sunlight that streamed through the dirty windows. A full litter box sat near the door. Mike motioned for Leo to stay, then stepped into the bedroom. A minute later he emerged carrying a small plastic bag containing an assortment of small white crystals.
                “$500,” said Mike, holding tightly to the bag.
                Leo swung his fist, catching the younger man off guard. Mike bounced off the wall and fell forward. Leo jumped into air and came down with his knee on the man's windpipe. Mike grabbed at his ruined throat and frantically tried to breathe. His kicking legs knocked over a bar stool sitting next to the kitchen counter. Leo picked up a kitchen knife and calmly pushed it into the chest of the helpless man on the ground. The struggling ceased. He carefully wiped the blade on a dirty towel and tucked it into the back pocket of his pants.
                Ben waved from the truck as Leo exited the trailer. Leo held up the meth like a trophy. Ben waved him into the truck.
                “Don't go waving that around, man. The police know that Mike deals. They watch this place sometimes.”
                Ben pulled away from the trailer and rejoined the highway. “How much did that cost you?” he asked.
                “We made a deal,” answered Leo.
                “You didn't trade him sex did you? Mike's got hep c!”
                “No, no sex.”
                “Okay, good,” laughed Ben, patting Leo on the knee. “I don't want you ruined before I convince you to make me a good offer for the ride.”
                Leo didn't answer. He was busy using the small pipe that Ben had provided him to heat up the methamphetamine. The drugs fogged his mind as his whole body relaxed. He closed his eyes as they drove north.


                Chapter 5

                “I thought we were going to have the play to ourselves?” questioned Fulton, pointing to the grey truck parked in the driveway.
                “We are,” answered Miranda. “I'm not sure who is here. It's a big family. My mom and dad said we could be here, so I assumed that nobody else was using the Fox Den. God, I hope it's not Harriet.” Harriet was her Aunt. She was the type that would stay the whole weekend and try to be “one of the gang.”
                The seven of them piled out of the vehicle. Shouldering bags and carrying beer, they trudged to the front door, and finding it unlocked, stepped inside.
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                • #9
                  Again, I know that the formatting isn't transferring over to the forum, but I hope you enjoy the story.
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                  • #10
                    I read this again, and now it's become clear what happened to Leo on the site. The league expunged all his records for crimes more heinous than even O.J.'s.

                    Don Helsel
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